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--- world_timeline [2024/01/13 11:27] – shto
+++ world_timeline [2024/01/13 14:29] (current) – shto
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 <milestone title = "" description="Assault on Outpost 447" data="KJ" backcolor="purple">
-//Oktomin 5, 1432 - Oktomin 8, 1432 , 1432//
+//Oktomin 5, 1432 - Oktomin 8, 1432//
 Outpost 447 within New Mourne is attacked by a swarm of Shimmerskins. They are led by Jackson Curtis, a unique shimmerskin with a yellow glow who appears to have the ability to command the "normal" shimmerskins in his presence. The attack is repelled by the defenders, with Vaeril ver Viridian proving particularly instrumental. After several days and significant losses, the shimmerskins retreat.
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 //Oktomin 17, 1432//
-Benjamin Greyford convinces his wife, Olivia Greyford, to kill her father in order to claim the Sword of Gebalam. She does so through the use of poison in an act that would later cause her to become Magnate of Subversion. Benjamin acquires the sword.
+Benjamin Greyford convinces his wife, Olivia Greyford, to kill her father in order to claim the Sword of Gebalam. She does so through the use of poison, and Benjamin acquires the sword.
 </milestone>
 <milestone title = "" description="Shimmerskin Connection Uncovered" data="KJ" backcolor="purple">
 //Neamin 2, 1432//
-The crew of the Dazzling Hatchet (Vaeril ver Veridian, Lebel de Renault, and Gus the Blue bullet) learn that Benjamin Greyford had arranged the attack on Outpost 447. The yellow shimmerskin, Jackson Curtis, agreed to the attack in exchange for a cure the the disease.
+The crew of the Dazzling Hatchet (Vaeril ver Veridian, Lebel de Renault, and Gus the Blue bullet) learn that Benjamin Greyford had arranged the attack on Outpost 447. The yellow shimmerskin, Jackson Curtis, agreed to the attack in exchange for a cure to the shimmerskin plague that afflicted him.
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 The crew of the Dazzling hatchet attempt to assassinate Olivia Greyford while Ben is distracted, and they learn she has become Magnate of Subversion. Using her guilt, they convince her to turn on her husband. Gebalam switches sides again, isolating Benjamin in Colben, at which point he is assassinated by the crew of the Dazzling Hatchet. Ben's War formally ends.
 </milestone>
-<milestone title = "" description="Massacre of the Riverdolphin Clan" data="CG" backcolor="red">
-//Tessmin 21, 1466//
-Schist Riverdolphin, an exiled member of the Riverdolphin clan of Solaria, is challenged to slay his entire clan. He is successful, and is granted membership within the upper echelon of the Carnival assassin's guild.
-</milestone>
 <milestone title = "" description="Massacre of the Riverdolphin Clan" data="CG" backcolor="red">
 //Tessmin 21, 1466//
-Schist Riverdolphin, an exiled member of the Riverdolphin clan of Solaria, is challenged to slay his entire clan. He is successful, and is granted membership within the upper echelon of the Carnival assassin's guild.
+Schist Riverdolphin, an exiled member of the Riverdolphin clan of Solaria, is challenged to slay his entire clan. He is successful, and is granted membership within the upper echelon of the Carnival assassin's guild for his efforts.
 </milestone>